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21楼 bruceleeligang
等级:院士
发帖数:1199
回帖数:22428
|  发帖时间 - 2009/3/19 10:45:35
| 我的开发信暂且不公开了啊
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22楼 stonelyk
等级:博士后
发帖数:99
回帖数:1810
| 发帖时间 - 2009/3/19 11:26:08
| 虽然我不太会写，但是这篇相当的一般。全文用了太多的***人称，结构也不清晰。。。
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23楼 stonelyk
等级:博士后
发帖数:99
回帖数:1810
| 发帖时间 - 2009/3/19 11:26:10
| 虽然我不太会写，但是这篇相当的一般。全文用了太多的***人称，结构也不清晰。。。
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24楼 stonelyk
等级:博士后
发帖数:99
回帖数:1810
| 发帖时间 - 2009/3/19 11:28:27
| 不好意思，发重复了。晒下我的吧，希望大家帮忙改正改正：
这封信完全是针对在网上随便找到的客户的。 Dear Sir or Madam, Hope everything goes well with you and your esteem company. Here we are writing to you with a view to set up friendly business relations with you. We are one of the earliest enterprises which engage in developing and manufacturing the loose-leaf binding facilities and the coil processing equipments in China. The main products include Automatic Punch Machine, Semi-automatic Double-wire Closing Machine and Double-wire Forming Machine, etc. Depending on the advanced processing facilities, an experienced hi-tech team, master processing craft, we are ready to serve you our products with high quality and competitive price. If you are interested in our products, please visit our website  http://www(dot)cx-auto(dot)com/about_ *域名隐藏* for more information, and feel free to contact us. If you have no interest in such kind of equipments, please also kindly advise us, and we won’t bother you anymore. Thanks for your kind cooperation in advance, and looking forward to hearing from you. Best regards.
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25楼 grace_syy
等级:大专生
发帖数:17
回帖数:473
| 发帖时间 - 2009/3/19 11:32:15
| 多谢
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26楼 jhd1123
等级:小学生
发帖数:0
回帖数:6
| 发帖时间 - 2009/3/19 11:35:21
| 顶上去
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27楼 bachelar
等级:硕士生
发帖数:28
回帖数:628
| 发帖时间 - 2009/3/19 12:54:02
| 对每个老外都这么发,还真需要耐心
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28楼 stonelyk
等级:博士后
发帖数:99
回帖数:1810
| 发帖时间 - 2009/3/19 13:55:06
| 当然不是啊，这是针对网上随便找到的客户，要 是在B2B上找的，展会上找的肯定要改一改的。
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29楼 suhong
等级:小学生
发帖数:0
回帖数:2
| 发帖时间 - 2009/3/20 15:39:37
| [face=黑体][color=#8FBC8F][size=4][face=黑体]
Dear Mr. Vu Loi,
i knew you from the website that you are in need of graphite electrode ,actually i am a member of one graphite company with ten years of experience in production of graphite products,,if you are interested in our products please let us know ,we are willing to serve you . we are looking forward to your good news ,thanks . Best regards, Suhong Li Xingtai Xinyuan Graphite Products Co., Ltd.
syshimosu8@yahoo(dot)cn
trademanager NO.:cn200831158
Website: http://www(dot)xtxysm(dot)com
http:// *域名隐藏* a(dot)com
[/face][/size][/color][/face] 本帖子2009-03-20 15:41:36由suhong进行编辑!!
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30楼 delilah
等级:博士生
发帖数:37
回帖数:1202
| 发帖时间 - 2009/3/20 15:52:00
| | 哈哈，多谢各位的鼎力支持啊。
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