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|  发帖时间 - 2006/3/15 20:21:19
| )很高兴收到你方8月25日询价,根据你方要求,今寄上有插图的目录和明细价目单.
两个逗号,三个分句,两个完整的意思.四种处理译法:
a.处理为一大一小两个简单句
We were very pleased to receive your inquiry of August 25 and enclose our illustrated catalogue and the detailed price-list as you asked.
b,处理为两个句子.
***句告知来信收到表示感谢,
We are very pleased to receive your inquiry of August 25.
We were very pleased to have received your inquiry of August 25.
第二句根据特定要求采取寄上目录和价单的行动.(汉语原文中省略了主语,英译文中必须有主语,译文的主语可以是"我"或"我们"或"我公司",这样译文可以是以下的任何一个或其他变体:
I am pleased to enclose our illustrated catalogue and the price-list for your reference.
We are pleased to enclose our illustrated catalogue and the price-list for your reference.
For your information we are sending you a copy of our illustrated catalogue and price-list.
We have enclosed our illustrated catalogue and a copy of the detailed price-list for you.
Our illustrated catalogue and price-list are enclosed for your reference.
Enclosed for your information are our illustrated catalogue and the detailed price-list as you asked.
C,把对方"you"作为译文的主语,这种着眼符合国际信函中比较受重视的you attitude,值得提倡.这样需要改变谓语用语,也就是由"寄"改为"收".
Enclosed please find our illustrated catalogue and the detailed price-list as you asked.
You will find in the attachment our illustrated catalogue and the detailed price-list you asked for.
Would you please check and find our illustrated catalogue and the detailed price-list enclosed.
D,译文主语为"目录".以物为主语在英语中远比汉语中用的多.
The illustrated catalogue and the detailed price-list you asked for have been enclosed.
Two copies of our illustrated catalogue and price-list , which you asked for, have been enclosed for your infomation.
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