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1楼 stonelyk
等级:博士后
发帖数:99
回帖数:1810
|  发帖时间 - 2008/4/10 15:44:00
| | 我们已经尽了***的努力破例接受了你们的定单。但因为你们的定单实在太小了，所以我们需要你们支付100%的预付款。如果你们需要分批付款，则你们的定单必须超过5W美金。 上面这段话如何翻译比较好？
关键是要注意语气。。。
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2楼 lianjun3344
等级:初中生
发帖数:9
回帖数:105
| 发帖时间 - 2008/4/10 16:17:46
| we have done our utmost to accept your order. but the quantity is small for the production, thus we have to require 100% prepayment. if you insist on partial payment, the total value amount must come to above 5w u.s. dollars.
FYI!
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3楼 bluesky271
等级:小学生
发帖数:3
回帖数:49
| 发帖时间 - 2008/4/10 16:39:49
| good
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4楼 enthyue
等级:博士生
发帖数:106
回帖数:965
| 发帖时间 - 2008/4/10 16:51:46
| Dear sir, we now confirm your order, but as the order is too less, we had to inform you that will accept 100% payment, if you wanna partial payment, the total amount of your order shall excess 50,000 USD. please be notified!
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5楼 sales82
等级:小学生
发帖数:5
回帖数:25
| 发帖时间 - 2008/4/10 16:55:35
| We have already used up maximal make great efforts to make an exception to have accepted your order form. The order form has been in fact very small but because of you, therefore we require that you pay 100%'s advance payment. If you need to pay a sum of money of in batches, your order form must exceed 5 W American dollars then.
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6楼 stonelyk
等级:博士后
发帖数:99
回帖数:1810
| 发帖时间 - 2008/4/11 7:59:14
| 谢谢各位了，我自己***后是这样翻译的，交流一下：
We have made an exception to accept your order as best we can. But I have to say that your order is really too small. Thus we require the prepayment in full. Installments are allowed only if the order exceeds $50,000.
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7楼 layton0123
等级:大专生
发帖数:34
回帖数:435
| 发帖时间 - 2008/4/11 9:39:19
| DearXXX, honestly speaking , it's an exception for us to accept your *域名隐藏* I'm afraid that there are some difficulties for us to accept your payment in prepaid and balance paid as your order is right beyond our payment priciples,which means that the prepaid should be 100% of the total amount unless your order equals to or more than USD50,000.00
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8楼 xiaohuzi522
等级:小学生
发帖数:4
回帖数:13
| 发帖时间 - 2008/4/11 10:21:21
| We already biggest diligently made an exception have accepted your order form. But because your order form too has been really small, therefore we need you to pay 100% advanced payment. If you need the partial payment, then your order form must surpass the 5W dollar.
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9楼 lancyhsiao
等级:小学生
发帖数:10
回帖数:45
| 发帖时间 - 2008/4/12 13:47:11
| 5樓＆7樓的不錯， 語氣也容易接受.... 受用了~~~
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10楼 simonlee001
等级:小学生
发帖数:0
回帖数:6
| 发帖时间 - 2008/4/12 13:52:49
| 我很欣赏2楼的翻译，看的出你的英语很地道！
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