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1楼 aysha
等级:小学生
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|  发帖时间 - 2006/3/14 11:09:58
| 我有个客户跟我要产品目录和报价，但现在工厂才开工，一个成品都没有。请帮我看看这么回邮件可不可以。帮我看看有没有什么错误的地方,有什么要改的.谢谢!
Thanks for your promopt reply. I regret to say that we do not have catalogue now, as our model not have so mush, But our development department are devote every effort to make more good designs. We will do our best to make it as soon as possible. Hope you can understand us. Meanwhile, we will have a batch of goods finish within this week. May i send these products photo with price list for you refer first. Of couse if can make sample for you will be highly appreciated. Any suggestion, pls feel free to contact us. 本帖子2006-03-14 14:40:08由aysha进行编辑!!
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2楼 VICKYQQT
等级:小学生
发帖数:7
回帖数:35
| 发帖时间 - 2006/4/8 17:10:32
| 给客户的邮件一定不要出现错误,你可以用简单的句子,但是我觉的你的表达不够专业
你的有些句子出现语法错误
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3楼 VICKYQQT
等级:小学生
发帖数:7
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| 发帖时间 - 2006/4/8 17:17:19
| | Thanks for your promopt reply. I regret to say(saying) that we do not have catalogue now, as our model not have so mush,(and we don't have so many models) But our development department are devote(has devoted) every (all)effort (efforts)to make more good(better) designs. We will do our best to make it as soon as possible. Hope(i hope) you can understand us. Meanwhile, we will have a batch of goods finish within this week. May i(will) send these products photo with price list for you refer first. Of couse if can make sample for you will be highly appreciated. Any suggestion, pls feel free to contact us. [/color]
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